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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；请注意分段。
Nowadays,we from the survey in education stand money earning.first of all,less than high school diploma of median weekly earning less than doctoral degree's one third,but we could recognise the more education pays the more gained, however the degree don't represent nearning high. After all,the boss pays your skills attention rather than anything else.if you get better learned habits that you have bright future.
