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Single room 30 yuan per day; a double room 20 yuan per person per day for meals 20 yuan per person per day. And hosts an eating lunch, a menu, a la carte, also can cook by yourself. Sea bathing, swimming, mountain climbing, unpaid greenhouse work (voluntary) supplement: close to understand China, still can feel the family atmosphere