单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若注意文中一些句法错误,文章会更不错;连词使用偏少。
Football is the most like you; a chance to let you fall in love with football; find a football in the home on the road, and then to play with friends, and deeply in love with football. often and students with training and competition. most loved football star is Beckham of Britain; the biggest wish is to become a occupation football player.