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Dear Linda, How are you getting along? I hope things are going well with you too. Your letter got to me at the end of last moth. Maybe it was delayed on the way I’m sorry I didn’t answer you on time. these days I have been busy preparing for exam. From your letter.m very sorry that I can’t come to spend Christmas with you, because my aunt said she would come to my house on that day. By the way, can you come here to spend the holidays with us? Please give my best regard to your parents. Yours, Lois