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Dear Mike, I'm glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is agust 15th of a family get together and enjothe dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the fwill go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pportant festivals for Chinese people. I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day. Yours, Li Hua