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December 30, 1999, Tuesday John Denver, a famous American country music singer, is giving his singing performances this week. I was lucky to get a ticket and heard him this evening. Denver is one of the famous country music singers in America. He has madd to many countries in the word. His songs are often broadcast on the radio and TV. He sangsongs were beautiful. Although I couldn’t understand some of the words in his songs, I could stibeauty of the country. I hope I can hear again.