2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(46):学生使用手机

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Dear Editor, I’m a senior high student. Now many students use mn the mobile phones . In my opinion ,the classroom is a place for students to gain knowledge .Therefore quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons .Those with mobile phones shouldn’t take mobile phones to the classroom . We are supposed to concentrate on our studies. The school should make a rule to forbid the students to use mobile phones in the classroom. Yours sincerely Wang Li