2.短文的单词数:80―120(开头已给出不计入单词总数,不必重写)
有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;请注意分段。
High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no regrets, I’ll make the best of my limited time to go over the lessons I’ve learned. At the same time appreciation to all the teachers who of great value to me. Last but not least, doing another good deed for my class is also my plan. With these things done, I will have no regrets in my high school life.