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Dear editor I have had a problem recently and I don't know what to do between what I want and what my parents want. I am an average student in my school. So my parents feel that I should spend more time improving my grades In this way, 1 can go to a good university in the future. However, I have been playing for the school basketball team for the past few years. My coach thinks As for me(In my opinion), I like basketball and 1 hope I will be well trained arid become a super star. Look forward to getting your advice soon. Yours, Li Hong