2005年辽宁高考写作范文：要不要回国工作

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June 8th Dear Jianhua , I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago . I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me . In my opinion , you should come back after you finish your studies abroad . For one reason , what you are studying is badly needto hire people like younk it will beare getting old . Therefore , I think it’s a good idea for you to return . So what are you waiting for ? Best wishes , Minghua