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enrich 使丰富；organize 组织；take an active part in 积极参与……
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Let's sing red songs In order to enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. Everyone took an active part in this activity, and the concert was suinion, red songs can make us learn more about the past. And we will love our country more than before. This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn't it?
