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April 25th,2009
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in China Daily of April 2nd.Yours sincerely,
Zhang Li
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Dear Sir or Madam, I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in China Daily of April 2th. I feel that both my education and experience fit me for it very much. My name is ZhangLi, twenty-three years old now, and will soon graduate from Beijing University. I major inbusiness very much. I am sure I can do it well. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Zhang Li
