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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
Dear Li Hua, You’re very kind to care about your classmates. Now I will give you some advice on how to protect your eyesight. If you want to protect your eyesight, I advise you to let y our eyes rest after a certain amount of time of study. You should do eye exercises every day, at least twice a day. You wear sunglasses on bright days. I hope my advice can help you and your classmates. Yours, Dr Helper
