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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写需要再认真些；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The Idea Of Econmical Consume With the development of economy ,the idea of consume has changed a lot .Some people think that the economical way of students is not wise .In terms of me ,the economical cosume is worthy of advocating. I have two reasons to support my view .For one thing , as a student ,we still depend on our parents .We have no rights to waste our partent's money ,so we should reduce our expenses. For another thing , we should have the habit of economy. Economy is a virtue of our nation ,so we should develop and expand our traditional virtue. In a word ,the way of student should be advocated .Not only we have no rights to waste the money but also we should inherit the traditinal virtue. So i disagree the opinion of the people that support students spend more money .
