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字数：300 满分：100分
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
The Idea Of Econmical Consume With the development of economy ,the idea of consumption has changed a lot .Some people claim that the economical way of students is not wise.In terms of me ,the economical consume is worth advocating. I have two reasons to support my view.For one thing, as students，we still depend on our parents .We have no rights to waste our parent's money ,so we should reduce our expenses. For another thing , we should have the habit of saving. Economy is a virtue of our nation ,so we should develop and expand our traditional virtues. In a word ,the way of student should be advocated .Not only we have no rights to waste the money but also we should inherit the traditinal virtue. So I disagree the opinion of the people that support students spend more money .
