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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33543
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

The Idea Of Econmical Consume With the development of economy ,the idea of consumption has changed a lot .Some people claim that the economical way of students is not wise.In terms of me ,the economical consume is worth advocating. I have two reasons to support my view.For one thing, as students,we still depend on our parents .We have no rights to waste our parent's money ,so we should reduce our expenses. For another thing , we should have the habit of saving. Economy is a virtue of our nation ,so we should develop and expand our traditional virtues. In a word ,the way of student should be advocated .Not only we have no rights to waste the money but also we should inherit the traditinal virtue. So I disagree the opinion of the people that support students spend more money .

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