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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
We can see that a bottle of milk was slipping above the picture.However,two people who standed near the bottle had defferent attitude toward what happens.One people showed out absolute depression,saying that"It is over now".While another smiled and said that "It is lucky that some milk was leaved inside the bottle".What the picture show us is valueable and meaningful. The aim at the picture is to tell us that when faced with failure in our life,work and study,different people have different attitude.People who are optimisic always are able to find good things.Oppotitelly,they always complain of what they lost.In a word,attitude decide one people whether is successful or failureful. In my view,we should learn to optimism.Whatever we face difficult in the life ,we should keep active attitude to face.Only this ,we can succeed.
