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The important of standardized testing in today’s society has caused us to place an undue emphasis on the core subjects of math language science and history.Arts education often falls by the wayside…important for a child’s development as studying the main subjects. studying are and music encourages creative thinking.students can be taught certain skills that allow them to express themselves more clearly.and then be give free rein to express whatever they want. ex:the word “o” .when i was a kid,i liked drawing.once teacher drew a circle on the black board and asking us what is that?some people said that like sun,the moon,the moon cakes,and donuts…If the same question in math class,I think everybody would say:it is a word “o “ arts education aids in healthy emotional development.Arts and music provide non-threatening means for children to express their thoughts and feelings.FOR EX:when i was younger ,i was skinny and weak, this is made me a prime target for bullying.But when i drew.i drew myself as a superhero.and this process of reimagining myself gave me the strength to endure the bullying and eventually stand up by my self. however it is not the case in reality,impose stress on students.