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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇，不过拼写错误比较多。
A Major Advantag of Adervertising on Television Advertisment as a way of publicity has acquired most great achievement.But more and more people complain the advertisment bored them ,and they hate the advertismet during they watching TV.In my eyes ,the advantages of advertisment outweight its disadvantages. For one thing,varieties product in the supermarket,so it is diffcult for us to choose the right produts.However, the advertisment can help us to know more about the products around us,including the fuction,the advantages,the usage and so on.For another thing,many TV Projects are offered by the advertisment company,so the TV advertising is reasonable.In other word,the advertisment company is deserved to boardcast on TV.If the TV advertsing is cancled,we will cat not see TV project. In brife,we should understand the TV advertising,and willing to accept it.I am inclined to see TV advertising,because it is very intersting and it offer many information for me.Little complain,little annoy.Treat the TV advertising as a entertainment,then you will acquire happiness.
