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简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
nowadays, it's a trend that students using gruop-by or on sale to buy somethings which cheaper than ones in the shop. they are good at using money. as far as i'm concerned, they can become a smartconsumer by using all of these. on the one hand, it's ture that using gruop-by or on sale can help student to use less money to buy more things. there is a better example from a friend of mine. in every weekends, he always eat out and wants to improve his quality of life. first, he would check which one he wanted to eat on the internet. then, he bought it on group-by internet which almost everything is cheaper 30 percent than bought in restaurants. after a semester, he restored 2000 yuan, which is add up other four students money. on the other hand, it can cultive a mind of thristy. it's important for students because only understanding the meaning of thristy, can students ues money correct and good. it's a first step to become a smart consumer. in conclusion, students would be a smart consumer by using group-by or on sale.
