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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays, it's a trend that students using group-by or on sale to buy something which is cheaper than ones in the shop. They are good at spending money. As far as I'm concerned, they can become a smart consumer by using all of these. On the one hand, it's true that group-by or on sale can help students to use less buy more things. There is a better example from a friend of mine. In every weekend, he always eats out and wants to improve his quality of life. First, he would check which one he wanted to eat on the internet. Then, he bought it on group-by internet which almost everything is cheaper 30 percent than bought in restaurants. After a semester, he restored 2000 yuan, which adds up to other four roommates money. On the other hand, it can cultivate a mind of thrift. It's important for students because only understanding the meaning of thrift, can students use money correct and good. It's a first step to become a smart consumer. In conclusion, students would be a smart consumer by using group-by or on sale.
