托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第4篇:比你年龄大的人的建议是否会比同龄人给你的建议有价值

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the thought of economics puts many to sleep_it conjures up images of professors spouting dry theory and students trudging through reams of mind-numbing data_yet i would argue that knowledge of the subject’s fundamentals is indispensable for those trying to get by in today;s society.so i think.. having an understanding of economics will give you a stronger background for managing your personal finances.an understanding of the basic underlying pricing,supply demand etc.,can help you decide whether to make a purchase.For ex:newly released laptop. (-) however it is not the case in reality ,impose stress on students. i think that there are better ways to deal with this problem,not only can learn knowledge about basic economics,but also have less stress on students.high school can instill knowledge by indirect way.for ex:teacher can talk some economics on the math class with watch related video.it is easy to instill the minds of students with fixed ideas.