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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(53): How to Get Along Well with Others

发布时间:2013-11-28 17:28浏览次数:288
要求:
鉴于现在很多独生子女不知道怎样与人打交道这一现象,请你写一篇题为 “How to Get Along Well with Others ” 的文章
要点:
1. 日常生活中我们不得不与人打交道
2. 要做一个诚实的人,要做到表里如一
3. 要谦虚,骄傲的人是得不到别人的尊重的,更不用说友谊了
4. 不能自私,要学会关心他人
注意:
1. 词数100左右
2. 可适当增加细节

3. 生词:谦虚的 humble自私的 selfish


In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

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air pollution can only be solved when people start creating demand for fossil fuel.walking biking places instead driven, the government do endangered species protection’s work in many years.but there are many people still hunting them.the government need spend time and energy to govern, personally,i think that they need educated person who do not realize environmental importance.An individual must recognize the ecological value of a piece of property and step up to preserve it.it is really simple thing when a complex problem distribution on individual. (-)but some problem will be complex for individual.such as “white pollution”it seem to easier than protect endangered species.it is not,actually, plastic bag issue is difficult to handle,because it involved too many people,and its essential in people’s daily life.So,at this moment need government again.ex,Chinese enacted statute that all places no longer provide free plastic bag.then the “white pollution’ reduced rapidly.

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