托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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being a professional athlete is amazingly tough on your body.i doubt that most people could ever the kind of physical stresses that professional athletes do.take for me .forex ache or pain.but my exercise only is a piece of cake for professional athletes.like swimming athletes,they need swim 5 kilometer at lest everyday,can you image it? professional athletes are constantly under a tremendous amount of mental pressure.the best athletes are performing for millions of viewers or more across the globe.they are expected whole country’s hope for champion.forex.when liuxiang was a champion in 2004 olympic.all Chinese feel excited and proud of him.so when 2008 olympic,he was on people’s expectations,we hope that he can be a champion in the china where his own country.he kew that,and trained hardly,because both of mental stress and physical stresses,he hurt. we have to ask ourselves this:if professional athletes did not receive salaries,where would the money from?professional sports paid all life for sports,country.they are training all day,how did they earn money from busy training life.