2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(35)写作:我的好朋友Li Lei

文章学术词汇较多样，不过请注意单词拼写的检查；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

On contemporary society,job and social life are nessarity part of people daily life.The decent job can offer pocketbook and social life can make you feel happy and relax.But personally,I think job will have more effect on my happiness than the social life does. Frist of all,job is my economic sources,it can ensure better material life for me.I think the material is the foundation of life, only good material life can bring me happiness.For instance,with more money,i can buy best of clothes,which could make me look smarter can beautiful.Also the better economic situation allows me to fill my diet with more meats,eggs,and milk,making me more energetic and healthy than before.after all, the body is the captial of revolution.So,if i am in health,i will feel happniess.Morevoer,with a decent salary,i can do many things to improve my living condition,like buying a big screen LCD TV and soil wood furniture,and even biring a professional house-keeper to take care of my daily life,the living environment of comfortable can bring me happiness naturally.If you live in a small,dark and damp apartment,you chould never feel happy. Scondly,Work can make my life full of power.I have experience greatly.For a child,school life is equivalent to the work.So When I was high school student,I need get up early for class and must finsh homework on time,concentrate on professor highly.I felt tired and upset,so every day looking forward to have a holiday.Probably every students have same idea I guess.Finally,holiday was coming,It is not as good as imagined.I almost stayed at bed whole day,because I have nothing to do!Every day was dacadent.Whenever at the started of school,I would feel excited.Because I was busy in the school,it can make feel motive and happiness. On the other hand,it is not say that scoical life can not make me feel happy.Everyone has a certain social circle.Friends can offer aid when i was in trouble.We shared interesting things of life mutual.They give me lots of support of spirit. All in all, I have to say that substance life is the base of happiness.Because friends can offer help from spirit or economic aid for shortly.Eventually i need to fight by meself that to create happiness life.