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Human activities do have severe influence on plants and animal species. Over all, I tend to agree with the view that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. The main reason why I think effective measure can be taken to improve this situation is that science and technology is developing during these years. For exzample, a car today can use less gasoline to drive a mile than in 1950s.Utilization results of energy is higher than before. As a result, we can use less resorse today to satisfy people's need, so plants and animals will have more space to survive. Adimittedly, some animals were ruthlessly hunted to the verge of extinction. It seems that protecting animal is a difficult work. In spite of this, many people are trying their best to give animals a better enviroment.
