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假如你是李明，上周你班同学就”毕业前我们该为学校做些什么?”进行了激烈的讨论。请你根据下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法及理由。
一些同学建议
全班筹钱，为校图书馆买书或其他东西
另外一些同学建议
无需花钱；好好学习，让学校以我们为荣
你的想法及理由
考生自拟
注意:
1.词数不少于80，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.要点完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；
3.信中不得使用真实的人名、校名。
Dear David,
Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate(毕业). The students in our class have different suggestions.
I’d like to know your idea. Could you give me some advice?
Best wishes,
Li Ming
文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段。
Some students think that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or something else for the school. Other students think that it's not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feel proud of us. In my opinion, we can collect our pocket money to buy some books for our school library. We can buy some detective stories and English novels. They don't cost much but they are useful. The younger students will like them. I hope every student in our school can do so.
