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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Human activities do have a major influence on plants and animal species. Over all, I tend to agree with the view that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. The main reason why I think effective measure can be taken to improve this situation is that science and technology is developing during these years. For example, a car today can use less gasoline to drive a mile than in 1950s.Utilization results of energy is higher than before. As a result, we can use less resource today to satisfy people's need, so plants and animals will live a better life. Adimittedly,the expanding human population requires more living space, and forests are always the first choice humans decide to sacrifice. Many animal species were ruthlessly hunted to the verge of extinction. It seems that protecting animals is a difficult job. In spite of this, many people are trying their best to give animals a better environment .
