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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Human activities do have a major influence on plants and animal species. Over all, I tend to agree with the view that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. The main reason why I have positive attitudes towards the problem is that science and technology is developing during these years. For example, a car today can use less gasoline to drive a mile than in 1950s.Utilization results of energy are higher than before. As a result, we can use advanced technical method to meet our needs instead of hunting and deforestation. In addition, many people have recognized that protecting wildlife is of great significance, many governments have placed strict regulations on fauna and flora protection .The effect of these policies might come through In the coming decades. Admittedly, the expanding human population requires more living space, and forests are always the first choice humans decide to sacrifice. Many animal species are ruthlessly hunted and have been driven to the brink of extinction. It seems that protecting animals is a difficult job. In spite of this, international organizations does attract attention to preserve natural habitats and protect endangered species. In conclusion, I would agree that this situation can be improved. And I also believe it is not late to take effective measures now.
