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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
There's no doubt that human beings have achieved huge progress for the past 100 years, no matter on science, technology or medical field. We are always struggling for a better life, which pushes the whole world moving forward. People are much more happier than old days. There are adequate merchandise in the shopping malls which can support different needs of people and more and more types of entertainment industries providing all kinds of amusements. In terms of science, human beings have gained a lot of historical achievements, such as our robots can land on the moon and mars, also astronauts can live in the space station built in the outer space. Lots of diseases can be cured and people can enjoy a much healthier life, so does the average life span of human beings extend. Communications between different countries become more frequent, and the world economy and multinational business are booming up. However, while we are celebrating the progress, we can't ignore the problems in front of us. Human beings are now developing the economy in sacrificing the environment. The environment become worse and worse, there's no much fresh air, global warming creates much desert and lots of animals lost their habitats. Rainforests are disappearing, ice in the North and South Polo are melting. Lots of species are dying out. If we keep paying no attention about all the changes, human beings won't survive alone. Also, besides the environmental problems, there are lots of conflicts and wars in our society. Issues of religions, races and boundaries still obsess a large amount of people. Number of refugees lost their homes and families in the war. Discriminations on the poor and color skin people are still existed. Earth is our mutual home of all lives living on it. Human beings should take the responsibility to protect it and make it a more comfortable and peaceful place for all species, so that we can get a continual development.
