高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown used to be around with green trees fishes play happily in the river . before the street are narrow and the buildings look so poor .with time goes and economic development ,now there are so many buildings ,cars running in the street .sadly , because of industrial development , the environment turn awful . the number of trees and fishes become smaller and smaller .it is time to solve the pollution problems for us