高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown is green tree around ago. The fishes are play in the water,and the rome is very poor ,the street is very small .From mow on,high buliding bulit up in the center of the city.All kinds of cars driving in the street. is develop quickly ,the enviroment is poor ,trees is and fish is disappear .we shuld take ations to redouce .