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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
In my opinion,to save money,there are some other ways likewise put it in the bank so we can get more money after we get it out though it is a little.To save money,how about cut some cost that is not neccessary. In my experience,I always store my money from my parents or relatives into the bank.Every year when I saw my account,there are more money than the time I store it,also it's a little.What's more.When I realize that I need money and I should save money,I'll think it twice when I buy something,thought that if I really need those things,if don't,then cut it from my list.So I can save some money. Saving money is not that hard,if only you have make a decision.And there are many ways.Sort of teenagers want to save money then just make a decision,just try it .
