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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear David Smith: In the first place,I want to thank your company custom one hundred t-shirts。Furthermore，In the second place,our company have suggesting for you,I hope your company use carton transport.You don't need afraid .because in the last week,our company with USA company is use carton transport, it is very good. I hope you can reply. your best friend wang hai 2013 year 6 month 1day
