托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

In my opinion, most of the view is right. In general situations, before we make a decision, we should think over and over. Only in this way can we find the best solution of one issue. For example, when I graduate from the university, I must choose a way between making preparation for graduate admission examination and taking up an occupation. In this situation I can not make snap judgments, I should think all the things about this problem through. If I made wrong decision, this decision will affect my life for a long time. But in some cases, there is not much time to make a decision, so I must do it right now. However, someone in this situation make right decisions, why? Because they are accustomed to use their knowledge and common sense to make quick judgments. As a whole, snap judgments can never be trusted. But in some cases which someone make can be trusted.