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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第32篇:政府的资金应如何投入使用

发布时间:2013-08-14 16:54浏览次数:755
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作文题目:

Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth.

Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

一些人认为政府应该尽可能多的出资探索外太空,而另外一些人却不同意这种做法,相反他们认为政府应把这些钱花在地球的基本需求上。你更偏向于哪种说法?

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Recently, some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space. And other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. I think in the foundation of the people`s basic living constantly improve, we must firmly grasp the core technology of the exploring outer space, waiting for an opportunity of mature, and then to space development. The reasons are as follows: First, beautiful superstructure is built on a solid foundation. That is to say, the government should first make better people`s basic construction work, the next step is to explore outer space. Just think, in the case of people do not have enough to eat, how to support the activity of exploring outer space. If because the behavior of exploring outer space leads to few people starved to death, people will lose confidence in our government. We not only guarantee the people`s basic life, but also give up the good prospect of to exploring outer space. This is the second point. Second, on the premise of to ensure people have enough to eat, master the core technology of exploring outer space, let our technology is not backward the other countries. My idea is to come up with a few financial support to the activiities of exploring outer space. Like this, not only ensure the people`s normal life, but also promotes the developments of outer space exploration technology. In last, through exploring outer space let us open out eyes, get more informations we did not already know. So, It is a very forable thing for our development that to explore outer space.

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