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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第30篇:你是否喜欢尝试新鲜事物

发布时间:2013-08-14 16:39浏览次数:3048
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Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

有人喜欢去做一些已有的事儿,而有些人更喜欢尝试新鲜事物。你呢?给出原因和具体例子。

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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;全文结构较为严谨。

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Some people like to do only what they already do well. And other people prefer to try new things and take risks. My idea is: do first familiar, ability promotion, to face the challenges. The reasons are as follows: First, we must learn the past person do learn from the experiences. The best way is to repeat the past person done. For example, we being new to the company planning department. The leader does not immediately give us a new project rather than let us look at the previous project(whether good or bad) learning experiences, or follow the old employee to take over the new project learning experiences. When we learn the experiences, we will be independent take over the new project. Then, we may add some ideas and innovations, try to let the customers accept, this is also a new challenge. Second, if when we face a challenge with no experiences, in most case, the core problem we can not catch, we will face failure. Of course, does not rule out our good luck, be able to complete the challenge. But, facing the challenge of that kind of excited mood is also a great temptation. In conclusion, when we have enough experiences and lessons, let us have more confidence to face the challenge.

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