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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
文章词汇表达不够丰富，在拼写方面也要继续努力；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
dear david smith: we are very thankful for you use T-shit of our company and bookde ten box T-shit. there are have some suggestion to you ,frise one ,don't use the wood box to load it.and you can use the wastebasket. because it can make the T-SHIT better ,and does't chang the shape . At recently ,our company cooperate with the onother companies of American and it ues the wastebasket.and it say very well. I wish you will reply me ,thank you very much.
