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Earning Money Instead Of Saving Money There is a hot debate about weather saving money is a smart consumers.people have different opinions about it .As far as I am concerned ,saving money is really not a smart constumer . As we all know ,saving money will not only limit your life quality ,but also makes no profits to the development of our economy increase.What's more ,saving money will impressed those salesman who are ready to earn money by saleing.Howerve,to earn money will be helpful to both ourselves and the salesmen,as well as bring live to the market .besies,it is also a good way to show your ability ,through which you will recieve a sense of achivement. In a word ,as a student in university, we should learn to earn money instead of saving money .It is benifit to no matter ourselves or other people.
