题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;作者学术词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;请注意分段。
Nowadays,more and more people can't trust others no matter friends or strangers.We awalys can't believe that we saw or hear because there are too many tricks in our life.However,trusting others is very important in our daily life and work.In a company,the basic spirit for a team is cooperation and which is based on trust.