雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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with the economy developing ,the people's life are getting better and better .when the people have more extra money ,some people want to go out of ourself country to travel in the world,so the oversea traveling is very hot in the recent years.the travel agent accept the application of the oversea traveling everyday ,special in the long holiday.there are hundreds and thousands parents with their children to travel to other countries in summer holiday and winter holiday.it will bring the two aspective effect. on the hand ,oversea traveling have positive effect .the people can open their eyesight and get the knowledge which they can't touch in their country. at the same time ,oversea traveling can promote to know each other and make the friendship between the coutries in the world.it will bring the economical developement of the destinal place. on the other hand , oversea traveling have negative effect ,it will bring the pollution of the environment and the destruction of the history site.it will also bring the loss of the foreign exchange of the export countries.