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Save money but not no spending money for appropriate object or thing. Money is a must for us every day. We need to buy clothes, we need to pay for transportation, need to buy food, need to buy furites etc. Spending money is import for us in every day. My view is saving money but not no spending money for appropriate object or thing. We want to show us better in frond of our colleages, friends, or families. What's more we went to be more confidence for ourselves. To chose the appropriate clothes is a good way to show us. We do not maintain to buy the clothes that have specical mark. Such as Nick, Linning, Ailaiyi, and so on. We need to buy the cloese of which material is better, and the style is better. Not only to buy closes for warm, but for more elegant, more nature. We need to save money, not to buy the clothese that is too expensive, but to buy the appropriate ones. I do not maintain to buy the expensive make-up goods.f I do not maintain consuming in expensive places. Saving money is important for our lives. Only we save some money, we can use them freely. Sometimes some of our friends marry in different cities, different provinces, we need to go there and clebrate with them together on this special day. It is neccessory. We need to spend time and money to strangthen our friendship. We also to make money arrangement for our relatives. Because they are the person who care for ourselves, the person who have the estimate relationship with us. It is our oblegation to do something or buy something for them. So in my point, money needs to save, to save more money on more important things. Saving money benefits for using money appropriately.