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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33543
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Saving money but not no spending money for appropriate object or thing. We need to buy things every day. We need to buy clothes, we need to pay for transportation, need to buy food, need to buy frutes etc. Spending money is import for us every day. My view is saving money but not no spending money for suitableobject or thing. We want to show us better in frond of our colleagues, friends, or families. What's more we want to be more confidence everyday. To select the appropriate clothes is a good way to present us.I do not maintain to buy the clothes that have specical mark. Such as Nick, Linning, Ailaiyi, and so on. We need to buy the cloese of which material is better, and the style is better. The purpose of buying clothes not only for warm. But also for more elegant, more nature. We need to save money, not to buy the clothese that is too expensive, or just for seconds enjoyment,but to buy the most appropriate ones. I do not maintain to buy the expensive make-up goods. I do not maintain consuming in expensive places. Taking care for money is important for our everyday lives. Only we save some money, we can use them freely. Sometimesour friends marry in different cities, different provinces, we need to go there and celebrate with them together on this special day. It is neccessory. We need to spend time and money to strangthen our friendship. We also need to make money arrangement for our relatives. Because they are the person who care for ourselves, the person who have the estimate relationship with us. It is our oblegation to do something or to buy something for them. In short, money needs to save, to save more money on more important things. Saving money would benefits us in using money appropriately.

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