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Saving money but not no spending money for appropriate object or thing. We need to buy things every day. We need to buy clothes, we need to pay for transportation, need to buy food, need to buy frutes etc. Spending money is import for us every day. My view is saving money but not no spending money for suitableobject or thing. We want to show us better in frond of our colleagues, friends, or families. What's more we want to be more confidence everyday. To select the appropriate clothes is a good way to present us.I do not maintain to buy the clothes that have specical mark. Such as Nick, Linning, Ailaiyi, and so on. We need to buy the cloese of which material is better, and the style is better. The purpose of buying clothes not only for warm. But also for more elegant, more nature. We need to save money, not to buy the clothese that is too expensive, or just for seconds enjoyment,but to buy the most appropriate ones. I do not maintain to buy the expensive make-up goods. I do not maintain consuming in expensive places. Taking care for money is important for our everyday lives. Only we save some money, we can use them freely. Sometimesour friends marry in different cities, different provinces, we need to go there and celebrate with them together on this special day. It is neccessory. We need to spend time and money to strangthen our friendship. We also need to make money arrangement for our relatives. Because they are the person who care for ourselves, the person who have the estimate relationship with us. It is our oblegation to do something or to buy something for them. In short, money needs to save, to save more money on more important things. Saving money would benefits us in using money appropriately.