题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;从句偏少,建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
On maintaining trust It is widely believed that trust is fundamental in personal communication and relationship.If we don't trust others,at the same time,others won't trust us.They are double effects. In business,businessmen often set traps for their enemies and lose credit quickly.In daily life,we are sometimes doubtful about other people.So maintaining trust is very necessary and important. We can set trust from small things