安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。
(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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Hello my name is sam I am from anhui I like my home very much In my home has a the Yellow Mountain.It takes our three hours to go to the yellow mountain . it also can buy bus or airplane go there.Go there can see many beautiful things like wondrous pines and unique rocks. I hope you can go to our home.