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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达较恰当，也能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Sir, I attended the exhibition which was held from 15th December to 22rd December in New York. During this period, I learnt the new product of your company with number 5670. I am very interested in this product. Kindly send us a price list and instruction. Thank you for your cooperation and looking forward to establishing business relationship. With best regards, Hu Bin
