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From VOA Learning English, this is the Education Report. Public universities in Nigeria have reopened after a nearly six-month long strike by teachers. In the city of Bauchi, teachers are now back in classrooms at the Abubakar Tafawa Balewa University. History lecturer Maimuna Sadiq attempts to begin where she stopped teaching in June.