2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

In modern society,with the popularization of computers and the development of the Internet,online shopping becomes a universal phenomenon in our life. Online shopping has a lot of advantages.On a hand,it is very convenient for us.We don't have to waste a lot of our energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the goods we like.Consumers can buy almost everything they need through the Internet,and they can search much information about different kinds of goods.Some people think online shopping can make our life more convenient.On the other hand,shopping on the Internet is also cheaper to us.We can compare the price among the online shops and then buy the goods with the low price. However,online shopping,likes other things,has some disadvantages.The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.Sometimes,the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the Internet.Secondly,we may get cheated sometimes.We have paid the money,but can't get the products we want.Sometimes the products we receive isn't the one we have ordered.Once cheated,we will find that we have nowhere to go to complain.What's more,our personal information may leak out when shopping on the Interent. In a word,shopping on the internet and buying in stores are both essential to us in our daily life.It all depends on you.