小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend who called lily.she is a beautiful girl and she helps me a lot in my life .she has long hair and big eyes.i like her very much.she and i like playing football very much.we often play football together after class.my mom thinks that she is a good girl,too.