小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Everybody has good friends.So do I. Sherlock,one of my good friends,is tall and thin.He has curly black hair and dark grey eyes which are really attractable.Besides,he is a very warm-heart boy who always gives others a hand when they are getting in trouble.Once I was ill,it was Sherlock helped me catch up with others in the class.What's more, Sherlock is also an easy-going mate,because everyone is willing to play with him. This is my good friend,Sherlock.