托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第44篇:你在读书看电影的时候学到了什么

作者学术词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

The issue of television advertising has become a big concern for many adults who has child. Whether it is good or not has long been debated for people from all walks for life. Although many people argued that it is disadvantageous for young children to watch television advertising, I am convinced that television advertising should be allowed to see. For one thing,as far as I am concerned, a major of the advertising never make a nevigated（navigated） impression on young children, on the contrary, they sometimes teach children some basic knowledge, such as public service advertising. My four-year-old cousin John likes watching TV advertising. Once time, I took him to the store to buy something, and we cross the road which a traffic light was built there. When we are waiting for the red light, an old woman compared to cross the road, and then my cousin shouted loudly" Don't break the red light".It was his voice stop the woman from crossing the road. I am so surprised that my cousin would ask people not to break the traffic light, because he just a child who was not allowed to go to the primary school yet. I am so curious that I asked him who had tought（taught） him not to break the red light. Surprisingly, he told me when he was watching the television advertising, he foung（found） a woman who had said the same words when a girl had wanted to break the light. For another, television advertising could improve children’s sensing capability and other abilities.For example, a child who has gift of painting could improve his skill for drawing the picture by watching televison(television) advertising,because the advertising are full of many beautiful colors, and these colors could combine to a beautiful picture. Besides that,Thus the television advertising is good for young children [30min]to watch. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that not all the television advertising is bad for youngchildren(young children) to watch. I suggest that parents could guide their children to choose the advertising that is beneficial for them. Only in this way can we use television advertising to teach young children many knowledge.